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The sinner in me

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:rose: Model: Andreea (=skyleaf)

:bulletgreen: Location: Roses Garden, Herastrau Park, Bucharest.
:bulletgreen: Photoshoot with ~azrael-x64.
:bulletgreen: More to come from this series soon.

:camera: More of SkyLeaf here.

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Image size
2434x3511px 4.74 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XTi
Shutter Speed
1/125 second
Aperture
F/2.8
Focal Length
50 mm
ISO Speed
400
Date Taken
Jun 8, 2009, 6:40:09 PM
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

In portraits, people tend to apply too much make-up to the model, ruining the whole purpose of an emotive portrait, which is to emphasize the natural beauty.
Mister =ScorpionEntity proved to us once again that beauty doesn't need tricks, that sometimes it's better when it's left untouched.
But I can find some mistakes in the technique. The eyes are the center of the photo, they immediately attract the viewer's attention, and yes, they are very beautiful, but, unfortunately, too much blur has been used on the model's face, ruining that sense of natural. It's clear that the model is supposed to be flawless, but too much is always messing up the composition. Also, I cannot find the purpose of the umbrella, I find it a bit over the line, but, overall, it integrates into the composition.
This is a nice example of a simple, yet attractive portrait.